Whisper Quiet

An intimate love poem

Whisper Quiet upon my neck 

As your favorite shade 

leaves Soft pink tattoos on my skin 

 And plaintive needs find refuge in my ear 

Subtle innuendo in your sparkling eyes 

With a murmured invitation 

Passions conspire, bodies entwine

 As you draw me in........ 

 And Whisper Quiet upon my neck.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Soft pink lipstick and kisses on your neck...
yummy...

You shared so much feeling in so few words in this sensual little delicious treat. Your talent never ceases to amaze me...
and by the way..
I love it when you whisper quiet..

Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

Thank you so very much my sweetest friend
You know how to make my day.

PS. I love the shade you wear.

Love ya.
HUGGS. . Trace

[Audrey M.]

And I go in for a bite if not a nuzzle. Sorry, a bit presumptuous on my part. But it's so sweet and romantic and deserving of a response as such.
Lovely poem, Trace. Becoming an addicted reader to your words 😁

[Trace]

Ah, but will you favor me with your favorite shade of pink?

I am so happy to have a new friend that enjoys my words.

Your words warm my ❤.

Huggs, Trace

[Audrey M.]

I've enjoyed every word 🤗

[Trace]

❤👍🥰😍🤗😚 thank you dear friend

[JayceeC]

A quietly sensual poem (no pun intended) that leaves a feeling of warmth and satisfies a that need for romance in the best sense of being up close and personal.
I wanted to find an older poem first and will review through several.

[Trace]

Thank you my friend for reading and commenting on this poem.
Your compliments mean the world to me.

Trace

[Glorwen Helyanwe]

Both sensual and romantic. This is short but says so much within just a few lines. Nicely done!

[Trace]

Sorry this is so late in coming.
But thank you so very much for reading and commenting.
read moreSorry this is so late in coming.
But thank you so very much for reading and commenting.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

MMMmmmmmm......now this is seductive, sensual, and oh so elegant, Trace. Leaves plenty to the imagination and yet leads the reader down the right path.....to the neck covered in soft pink tattoos! Fantastic work. Lydi**

[Trace]

Thank you so very much my dear friend for your lovely compliments.

I bet you have left a few tattoos in your time......haven't you?

HUGGS. .. Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

A lady never tells! LOL

[Trace]

But the lipstick never lies....

[Alfred Kukitz]

Some poems I just love to love. Here is one by Trace. Whew!

[Trace]

This is the kind of compliments and comments that truly make my day.

Thank you so very much.

Trace

[Diana]

A subtle ending, but perfect for this poem. Also, I think you mean plaintive (as in melancholy), rather than plaintiff (a defendant in court). We wouldn't want people to get confused. ;)

[Trace]

Thank you for your excellent comments and suggestions.
You are correct. It was written as plaintive but in posting from my phone, the autocorrect thought it knew better than I how to write poetry.

Nice to see you.
Trace

[Matching Socks]

Very beautiful Trace. Soft, sensual, romantic moments like these should not be cherished.

[Trace]

Thank you for your compliments and comments on my poem.
Did you mean: "should be cherished? Hoping......

Trace

[Matching Socks]

Haha... I believe that's what I meant. Wtf?
How'd that 'not' get in there?

[Trace]

The creepy autocorrect gremlins strike again.

[Matching Socks]

Must be... :-)

[Trace]

They haunt my cell phone keyboard all the timeline

D****t. See?

[Matching Socks]

Lol!! Same with my iPad... Has a mind of it's own.

[Woody]

deliciously enticing!! very subtle but, oh, the images it summons!!!
reminded me of the Beatles' "closer... let me whisper in your ears...

[Trace]

Tell me things I want to hear..........

Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments on my poem.

[Lyn Anderson]

Oooh, this one gets me. For me, it's about a woman with whom there is an intense attraction, the speaker is not sure he should, but he does anyway ... one of my favourites of yours, for sure.

[Trace]

I think you know me too well.
My goodness. .. thank you for your excellent comments and compliments.

Trace