Your Way of Love

Your Way of Love

A Poem by Original Stories

I loved you

Ever so dearly.

I needed you,

Always, eternally.

Then you turned your back on me,

Held me down,

Held me back.

Never let me breath,

Never gave me a chance.

Your twisted way of love,

Broke me inside out.

Your brutal way of love,

Tore me limb from limb.

You cut me deep,

Nearly killing me.

Then you left me there,

To bleed eternally.

You thought I deserved it,

You thought you were doing good.

You thought you were relieving the world of me.

Well now you will,

Are you happy?

Now I will leave,

Now and forever.

For your way worked,

Now I’m gone forever.

© 2017 Original Stories



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The start and the middle of this piece were strong, and emotive. However, I feel the ending let it down. It didn't meet the high standard from the other parts, and didn't finish off the story like I was hoping. But it was still a good piece never the less :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The start and the middle of this piece were strong, and emotive. However, I feel the ending let it down. It didn't meet the high standard from the other parts, and didn't finish off the story like I was hoping. But it was still a good piece never the less :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 24, 2017
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Tags: broken love, suicide, hurt, pain, suicide note

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