Blah

It doesn’t matter anymore

Somehow I just don’t care

You can cut me to the core

I wonder if you’d dare

 

Love is something you don’t feel

For anyone but you

I just wish that you could be real

For a minute or two

 

You need to stop judging others

Take a look deep inside

And when you start pointing fingers

Don’t forget what you hide

 

Reviews

[LlamaLord]

I really like the way you write. It all seems very raw and you know how to turn feelings past the regular emotion. Great piece. I also agree with Joanna, maybe add some imagery :)

[Joanna Maharis]

This is a beautiful poem with meaningful feelings, but I would be able to better connect with it if there was some imagery incorporated into it.

[Aly]

This is a great poem :D
Good job ^^

[Lady leah]

We all point fingers at time to time blah blah blah