Why Should I Miss You?

A feeling where we miss someone and then resist that feeling

Out of nowhere i start feeling lonely,
a feeling in which you may be in crowd,
yet alone,
a mind full of thoughts,
but still,
you're left out in void,
a flashback passes through your mind,
there was a soul,
who made you whole,
a mesmerizing memory,
which you cannot hold,
so you dissent it,
remembering the past,
what that person did to you,
who was once someone special to you,
left out to ask,
why should i miss you?

Author's Note

not sure about the construction...please leave a review...thank you :)

Reviews

[Sandipta$]

Just stay calm..... Apne kabhi chhod K nehi jaate..... Jo chhod k jaate hain... Woh apne nehi hote... 🎭

[Ardra]

who was once someone special to you,
left out to ask,
why should i miss you?

Mmmmm nicely penned :)

[It Will Change]

Thank you Dear :)

[matrixmark]

2 simple words sprung to my mind whilst reading this.

Thought provoking.
I think it sums it all up.

Mark.

[It Will Change]

thank you mark :)

[Manasa.L]

Very nice. A unique writing. Absolute delight. Keep writing.

[It Will Change]

Thank you reading :)

[isha_sinha]

So well written... Portraits your feelings for someone special who I left your hands in the middle of the path... Somewhere that person still occupies a place in your mind and heart... Even after all those time you have passed without that person their thoughts knock you again and again without any of your notice that why you miss that person...Loved it

[It Will Change]

Thanks Dear :)

[isha_sinha]

Welcome dear:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is amazing! Very thought provoking!

[It Will Change]

Thank you :D

[Stacy Purvis]

The fact that you are thinking of the person at all gives value to that person. Actions speak louder than words. Excellent read.

[It Will Change]

thank you for reading :)

[Gina]

AMAZING! This is your unique way of writing and it is admirable! Keep it up;)

Always, Gina

We are infinite...

[It Will Change]

Thank you so much :) :)

[Gina]

No problem!

[heartspeaks]

Nice poem. It sure potrays the thoughts gushing back in a broken heart. I liked the style of the poem . Not all words rhyme yet it sounds beautiful. Not everyone can write unrhyming yet poetic . Good job.

[It Will Change]

I'm glad you liked it...Thank you :) :)

[heartspeaks]

you're welcome

[Mr.Writer]

Nice job! :) Keep up the great work!! :)

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[MaryKC]

I'm new to this site. I really like this. I could immediately relate to this as I know many could. I like poetry where I can instantly visualize the situation. The imagery is good here.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you!

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[MaryKC]

You're welcome!