Earth's Soul

Earth's Soul

A Poem by Valentine

         Earth's Soul


As all of nature, goes to sleep;

When winter's snow, drifts down.

All creaking timber, sighs and weeps,

For earth's soul, goes...underground.


Cold ice covers, land's dying warmth,

As bitter coldness, enters inside.

Burying all ugliness, where no real harm;

Can come to what, the earth and ice hide.


For a season of time, the world stands still,

Chilled by the brisk freezing breeze.

When suddenly...the sun shines at will,

Slowly thawing, the long winter freeze.


Like warm hands held fast... to the earth,

It once again the ground... shows us its soul;

Opening like, another miracle of birth,

When the sun and ground are again whole.


The sighing and shaking, of the warm land;

As all of the undergrowth pushes through.

Mother Nature needs... no helping hand,

As she awaits spring's rebirth... anew.


Then earth's soul is once again free;

Opening up and baring itself for all to see.


             Valentine


© 2017 Valentine



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In some philosophical and religious belief systems, the ‘Earth’s Soul’ represents a spirituality of renewal and resurrection! Your exquisite write demonstrates how blessed we are …

Posted 2 Months Ago


Wow, I haven't been on here in so long, and as a result, had forgotten how awesome you are with flow and imagery. I absolutely adored reading this. Fantastic job!

Posted 4 Months Ago


where are you at woman,we miss u

Posted 5 Months Ago


You've done a great job of personifying this journey, with vivid descriptions that bring each season alive. Perfectly crafted with rhyme & rhythm, plus word choices that suggest a soft gentleness like the quietness of winter.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lightly grow ,the idea you framed effortlessly flow

Posted 7 Months Ago


dear Kathie... The earth does sigh and breathe in the Spring when the hands of G-d caress our world as sunshine warms our soul. When I suddenly see the new buds forming on the gentle branches of a cherry tree... I believe... Amen
truly, Pat

Posted 8 Months Ago


Beautiful poem love the imagery in feeling in the words throughout it

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. Kathie
Cyprian Van Dyke

8 Months Ago

You're most welcome
We don't have much of a winter here in California, but your beautiful descriptions took me there. I love the last two verses, my favorites in this wonderful poem. :) Julie

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Julie, I lived in Van Nuys for a time when I was younger. Lots of dust and the smell of orange blos.. read more
Whether it is the choice of words or the way they flow together but this is a perfect combination of intent, subject and composition. I found myself willing the words to grow springlike as I read through. Excellent.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Ken, sometimes if we are lucky, the words just flow into the mind. Other times, all I get is a blan.. read more
You really captured the essence of nature perfectly, a great tribute to our beautiful planet... thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Living where there are 4 seasons helps. Kathie

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