If Jealousy Were A Disease...

If Jealousy Were A Disease...

A Poem by Vivica Heart
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Then I'd be sick as a dog. Another jealousy-inspired poem.

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It makes me sick to see you

It makes me want to die

It makes me wish to be you

It makes me want to cry

You just don't get it

You just can't comprehend

You just won't get it

I'm in love with him.

 

© SRM '07

© 2008 Vivica Heart


Author's Note

Vivica Heart
I know there are like, no punctuation marks whatsoever, but... I just didn't feel like putting 'em in.

Once again, give me your honest opinion or give me no review at all. I'd much rather know that you think it sucks than have you lie to me. -nods-

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A short yet a very powerful and vivid piece.
An awesome write :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very well written. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 28, 2008

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Vivica Heart

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