Deep Nicotine

It's about being self-destructive and how it can be contagious if you make it so

This don't outweigh the faces

Build your palace of stains

It's a present for you

It doesn't matter to you

But your mouth has fallen

Blister winds escape from

What am I to say why

You and I are cleaner

I can break you much more

You're as patient as I am

Crawling into your sleep

I'm as stupid as you are

Don't you just love it lately

With the night becoming empty

Brooding soul and no spine

It's alright because I'm clean

Well you are fatally cute

When you staring in me

I can wash my skin too

Doesn't feel so different

I can break you much more

You're as patient as I am

Crawling into your sleep

I'm as stupid as you are

Reviews

[Aries1984]

I wonder if your words of choice here convey the description of this poem being about self destruction? Reading this piece I felt life my mind was going in all directions. I'm not sure if that's the way you intended to write this. I do like it though.

[Matching Socks]

Fatally cute...
I like that. Good poem.