To The Enterance

Perhaps you would like to help me

I can't let you

Perhaps you would like to take my burdens

They are not mine

So I can't let you

Perhaps you do know the horrors of life

But the horrors are built to challenge a persons character

Yours and mine are different

I can't let you help me

Perhaps advice would do

I must change it

To fit my challenge

I do take it though

Perhaps we are on the same world

Living the same life kind

But the interior rewards are never the same

Perhaps...perhaps

You are my guide

Even so I can't let you take me all the way

To the entrance would be enough

Reviews

[Felecia]

I'm surprised no one has reviewed this yet. I found this piece sort of haunting? I'm not exactly sure if that's the word I'm searchng for.
There's truth in this poem, and I can feel saddness and desperation. An bravory, above all. But bravory, can cause loneliness, no? Bravory would mean you feel you can do things on your own, which can cause loneliness.

Perhaps you do know the horrors of life
But the horrors are built to challenge a persons character
Yours and mine are different
I can't let you help me


There's a lot of truth in this. These lines of this poem struck me the most.

Well, i hopethis review made some sense...all in all, wonderful job. Very well written, and an amaazing piece all together

[Time's The Bond]

Aww thanks yes I understood every word and am very thankful!

[Felecia]

Glad I did haha, and you're welcome :)