Time To Die

Time To Die

A Poem by Savior of Time
"

My conversations with the voices in my head..

"
I'm scared,
And lonely,
In the pitch black

I don't make a sound,
Letting the cold building creek,
I hear the voices in the room,

Walk outside into the dark of night,
They say to me in hushed whispers,
You won't be lonely,

I wish to obey the commands,
But all that's out there is bloody snow,
From my freezing arms and legs,

Don't let a little red get in your way,
The raspy voices speak again,
Everything's alright outside,

Tempted to go outside,
I listen to them one more time,
It's your turn to die

© 2013 Savior of Time


Author's Note

Savior of Time
With "Battle Scars", "You Will", and "Run". I went on a spree that day and this is one of them.

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This is good. You showed something a little bit different in this one compared to the others, but you STILL made a great poem out of this one. :)

Great job with this one, Willa. :)

Abby :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I tend to sometimes change up how I make them, and apparently I did it with this one. Tha.. read more
Abby

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome. :)

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