The Legend of Love

My heart flutters,

on air so light,

it could fall right through,

and Faint.

 

So I will ask,

Oh Knight

Will you hold my hand?

 

You have fought the king’s battles.

You have held up thy kingdom.

What then shall be made of your bravery?

 

I will tell, your tale.

Spinning it

into my thread

and weaving it

into silks.

 

It will cover the thoughts

Of all who think. Or do not think.

For your sake,

I can assure you,

That I do,

think.

 

You will be known

in lands unheard of.

Every soldier

Will hold the honor

of fighting with you,

fighting against you,

in battle.

 

There can be shame

Such shame.

Then again

There can not.

For you are

Desired and hated

For what post you hold

In hearts.

 

This shall be your legend.

The legend of love.

Reviews

[Adam :P]

beautifal flow

[manifesto]

I agree with Robin, eloquent elegance indeed. A true legend, with the calm and ka-pow in all the right places :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is adorable. It flows well, and leaves the reader with a smile. (: Great work here Dear.

[al25]

Very well written

[YouoweYoupay]

Beautiful flow. :) loved the the contradiction.

[Ari and Sylph]

good job. I like how elegant the wording is for the write.

[KL]

The tale of your knight in shining armour, fighting against all odds to eventually slay the dragon. A lovely analogy.

[Robin]

eloquent elegance , a joy to read

[Blossom]

wow. this is so col. very romantic and wonderful.

[Kate Hunter]

Very very well written. I can see this as a monologue for a movie.