Black Curtain

I'm known as a Loser.

You don't realize it.

Each step I take infront of you is carefully thought out.

Never would I misplace my actions

Because you would think of me as nothing more than a piece of crap.

All the eyes of people bare into my skin, digging out errors.

I hide behind a curtain. The curtain is black.

People judge.

I hate people.

He's so loud. I hate him.

Everything he writes is in capitals. It screams in my head.

The screams turn into white light. Blinding.

When he's quiet,  I love him.

He's with me behind the black curtain.

He likes to judge. It pisses me off.

I believe he hides behind a white curtain.

We are such opposites.

When we meet, its like hide n seek,

From behind our curtains.

We will likely never meet.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Jus something I was thinking bout.

Reviews

[manifesto]

Don't we all hide behind our curtains of black and white? Sometimes we're one, sometimes we are another, and sometimes, we are neither, just purely ourselves... Thought-provoking poem. Keep it up!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Masterpiece! I felt at least four story lines in this. Keep writing-you have a gift.

[Blossom]

wow. different way of expressing black and white. new concept and very unique.

[Robin]

a dance of contrasts ~

[Linzey]

it's a great concept. i quite like it =)