A Nobody in Wonderland

A heart turned cold from hatred,

She feels no pain at all.

But then again feeling numb,

May be the worst death of all.

So tired of the games they play,

so tired of the things they say.

Locked in the desolate tower of her mind.

Kept hidden from the evil prying eyes.

Nobody knows her true thoughts,

Not that they would care,

Because to them she’s nobody.

A nobody who lives in Wonderland.

Reviews

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"A heart turned cold from hatred,
She feels no pain at all.
But then again feeling numb,
May be the worst death of all."

THIS POEM IS AMAZING!! Haha, the words flow beautifully. I can relate to it. It's amazing!
You are a very talented poet. Keep writing! :)

[Dai Edenburough]

WHOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!! KEEEP IT UP!!! GOOD RHYTHM TOO!

[Vanessa Rico]

The simpleness of this poem is what makes it so powerful. You have painted a picture with your words that everyone can relate to. Beautiful work!