~ Mirrored

...Look, and thou shalt see...

 

~ Mirrored

 

 

Sheer reflection seen, in the distance,

Eyes wide open, wings spread wide

You saw me coming,

         From a thousand spring times,

                   Waiting there down the river,

I never believed, I could be alive again,

To breathe after so many lifetimes, of death~

           But you gave me the hope,

To kill this purgatory

Where I’d wait for hell, too long,

Now in this realm, it all starts, whilst I’m gone

          And so you will live, be there,

      All with a drop of silence

    Mirrored through me, with me

Welcome to Elysion, my love,

           Feel at home…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

It might feel as if looking into a mirror whilst looking into another's eyes and seeing their soul. There is similarity, yet a divergence, certain parts of opposition that come together to create completion, unison, and it is most powerful. You blend colors in the chamber of the heart. It is there forever, the entrance to your infinite land of Elysion, always accessible, and a shared home, ever reaching for the ones you love.. The whole time, I sensed the journey of a butterfly, a revival, and so a new beginning. It's as if someone showed the way, but it truly starts with one's own strength of mind, or heart.. I feel embraced every time I come here. It's just that vibe of yours.. xx

Thank you love, for this gorgeous review, sigh, if it wasn't you Shell, who get's me, I don't know anymore lol you really did felt/sensed all so well. It's true, there is a new beginning, a strong one, a real one, and I'm glad, to be there. And to take you with me on the journey! :) You are embraced with my two both arms, and you know what? your present brings luck... it protects real good ;) I'm so happy with it still everytime I look at it. ^^ Thank you immensely for your words, and friendship dear one. -xxx-

[Michelle N. H.]

You're most welcome. I'm happy to know that my little present does bring a bit of luck and protection. It was my hope he'd fit in with the rest, heh. =) Thank you too, for being a friend of mine.. It goes deeper than that. I apologize for my late response. x

Oh and he did Sis... He just fits in perfectly. Heh =) no worries my sweetest, I know you are not always have the possibility to come online there, p.s. is your laptop fixed? I hope so...you are missed, but as always around, love it! Thank you for being a friend of mine, heart to heart... Hugs -xx-

[Michelle N. H.]

My laptop is not yet fixed. Perhaps within this week it will. I'm using my phone at this moment.. Thank you as well, once again, dear Lis. xx

Oh it will take some time ofc. say hi from me to everyone, and have a nice morning dear!! -xx-

Oops WC-Glitch, my answer got cut off... so here again: Thank you dear, you've graced me with your insight on this one. You get it so well... goosebumps. And I have a weak for the Greek too, you will notice some of my older pieces are related to them as well. I'm so thankful, glad you enjoyd the mystery of this one, ((HUGS)) Lis -x-

[Alfred Kukitz]

From a thousand spring times helps resonate your transformation, like a never ending cascade of hope.

Thank you so much for your time and words Sir.

[Chris]

Such a gentle reminder of how caring a person can be... thank you for this Eli... I needed it this evening.

No, really thank you Chris, for what you wrote tonight, so touché, and all you do. You are appreciated. Take care.

[Dannyisawriter]

I. LIKED. THIS. POEM!!! So much I don't where to start haha

Thank you kindly Danny. :)

[PearlPoet]

Beautiful.. ~hugs~ .........

Thanks Alfred :)

[PearlPoet]

no, Thank You... :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow! This has everything! Words, music, poetic soul. THe total package. Excellent work Elisa

Aw thank you so much dear friend, for your visit, and time ^^

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Felt as if I had come home to rest. It was the feeling of gravity pulling down
at your bones when you finally lie down with no worries and sprawl out in
the nest. Beautiful. You really know how to weave an unforgettable world.

My friend, thank you so much for your empathy, and words here. Means the world to me. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

I had to stop by to rate. lol

Lol you are too funny xD

[Pryde Foltz]

A sublime write … very ethereal and elegant, l'il sis:)

Darling thank you so much!! I do love your reviews. :) -x- Sis

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Had the feel of the Poet Virgil.
'But you gave me the hope,
To kill this purgatory
Where I’d wait for hell, too long"
Good when we can escape purgatory. Find hope in something worthwhile. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

John, thank you so much my friend, for the lovely words towards this one, you picked out the lines, that are very important to me. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I always enjoy your poetry.