Love

Self-explanitory

Love

 

Do I deserve this?

Where did I go right?

Was it when it hurt so bad…

Just to say “Good Night”?

 

Maybe it’s all in my head

Maybe it’s not true

Maybe you don’t exist

Although I’m sure you do

 

Why is it that when you hurt

My heart is crying too?

Every time you call

I’ll be here for you

 

What is this feeling?

A gift from above?

What ever it is

Can I call it Love?

Author's Note

Tell me what you think and be compleatly honest.

Reviews

[BjH]

i like the almost over innocent pleading tone of this

would love to see an answering poem to it's pleas and questions

yours

benjamin john haigh

[lauren emily]

When falling in love..well--I'll tell it to you straight--you're not sure of anything! lol. Everything is so wrapped up in emotion and stuff that you can't think straight. You're too focused on that one person who has captured your heart.
I really like this poem, it explains the crazy and unsure feeling of love really well.
Keep up the great work,
~Lauren

[Lindsay.]

Honestly, this is an awesome piece of writing.

I agree with the first reviewer, the first stanza is the best.
It's also the one I can relate to the most.

Over all, very nice job. And I liked it, a lot.

[Spat Queen]

I never have seen love put quite so thoughtfully. You seem to be an expert on the subject, which is a breath of fresh air. Nice job.

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I think it's good. The first stanza is the best, I think. It definitely sets the mood. I have trouble understanding what specifically is the dilemma here, but, if it were too easy to understand without reflection, without contemplation, it wouldn't be a good poem, and you undoubtedly call upon the reader to think carefully over the poem. I would say, it's a good poem. Good job!