Umbrella

Umbrella

A Poem by Yahallo
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What is your umbrella protecting you from?

"
underneath my umbrella
i hide
from the rain that's attacking
splash splash
from the wind that's screaming
woo woo
from the wrath of the angered sky
thump thump
or perhaps
i simply hide
from the faces in the street
and the mirrors i might meet



© 2018 Yahallo


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Awesome use of "umbrella" in this poem. We often read poems that speak only to the mind and body's protective covers, not something external we can hold, turn, re-position, open and close. It works well in this poem. I also like the "mirrors" reference at the end, suggesting it's not just the struggles outside our body that we face. Impressive work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yahallo

6 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much, Robert!

I didn't want this poem to be too long, sometimes les.. read more



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Awesome use of "umbrella" in this poem. We often read poems that speak only to the mind and body's protective covers, not something external we can hold, turn, re-position, open and close. It works well in this poem. I also like the "mirrors" reference at the end, suggesting it's not just the struggles outside our body that we face. Impressive work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yahallo

6 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much, Robert!

I didn't want this poem to be too long, sometimes les.. read more

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Added on January 7, 2018
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