Beholder

Beholder

A Poem by YanZeros
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Bohemian Love (2/5)

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Softly gusting winds

Sprinkles salty seawater

Breathing in the taste

 

Metallic blue coats

Infinite serenity

Drench peace to thy soul!

 

Look far! Then you'll see

The Shimmering Sunset Glow!

Raining down the land

 

Vast Cumulus Clouds

Separates the Earth and Sky

Sundering the Light!

 

Casting through the Fog

Outlining the Mountainscapes

Braced by Mystery

 

Makes me wonder why

Am I the only human?

Praising this Beauty!


© 2016 YanZeros



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YanZeros
reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

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You weave a wondrous scene that's captivating in beauty but also closes with a good point; it's reflective for both the writer and reader. People become so focused on the comings and goings of their own lives, they sometimes forget the luster of things and people around them. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Thank you! and thank you for leaving an insightful review Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee) :) and Y.. read more
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

1 Year Ago

It's good writing and no prob!



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If these are the haiku writes, you have mastered them. I am totally a mess trying this type of a write. Nice going. Valentine

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

11 Months Ago

Thank you Ms. Valentine. Yes I'm writing this using haiku 5-7-5 syllable format. Still got lots to l.. read more
Nice imagery here. Lots of detail. Thank you for sharing this piece with us..
..Misty

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Thank you Misty! I had fun writing this Haiku :)
Well done. Enjoyed reading. And I had to read more than once. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing! OhSnapShley and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. you're welcome.. read more
You weave a wondrous scene that's captivating in beauty but also closes with a good point; it's reflective for both the writer and reader. People become so focused on the comings and goings of their own lives, they sometimes forget the luster of things and people around them. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Thank you! and thank you for leaving an insightful review Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee) :) and Y.. read more
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

1 Year Ago

It's good writing and no prob!
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Nicely done...and no you're not the only one. Sometimes our vision is so foggy said blurred that the beauty get lost. Lovely piece/imagery. Starz

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Thank you Starzy :) you are right! The beauty gets lost when no one appreciates it.
I hope you are not the only one..but when we admire the vastness of this world, sometimes it seems we are alone..a single heart, and soul in praise..

NICE..!!

Jazzy

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jazzy! That is true, I'm hoping so too!
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Year Ago

You are welcome................ Jazzy
No you aren't the only one :p
Jokes apart.. This was nice! Often we ignore the beauties of the world only focusing on our sorrows.. Beautifully captured 👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

1 Year Ago

:) xD now its your turn to write your Haiku.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hah well yes... I hope I can...
YanZeros

1 Year Ago

Of course you can!

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