Frigid Love

Tear me, rip me, dear me

Love as though it fears

Love me till my heart will freeze

Until the dying start

 

Tearlids are so frigid

When you sell them for a dear

Eyelids oh so broken

From hiding in a die like life

 

Erasure of erectness

Nymphets all around

All the men, the wars, the fame

The willing lying down

 

In a world by halt

Nothing as clear as sby rich

Amorous, they whisper to my

Broken corpse of heart.

Author's Note

Owe you big time if you give me a review on this! (:

Reviews

[khalid]

although i feel it is a sad poem, i feel it is really nice to read the images of love and passion it has. very nice piece

[WildAssociativeLeaps]

I love your first lines! But I don't entirely understand what, "From hiding in a die like life" means. Could you clarify?

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. you don't owe anyone who reads you ...
. you write very beautifully ... this is such a moving piece of writing ...
. i don't think your heart could ever die ...
. it beats with all the poetry in it ...