Conditional Love

Conditional Love

A Poem by Yari Garcia (Older Profile)
"

A poem from 2011

"

Conditional Love


My love is conditional
measured in teaspoons and handfuls
Like a bank loan
given out only to good credit
and taken
if missed too many payments

My love is forgiving
but within reason
Cause there’s only so much to forget
with lies and treason
It lets me be sweet, it lets me be adored
but my love won’t let me
be destroyed

© 2017 Yari Garcia (Older Profile)


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I agree, though some people in my life would say this is a flaw in my character! Wise words & well put.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Almost all human love is conditional; indeed, it likely constitutes the wisest course.
Very fine work, Yari!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful words and the right attitude to have!

Posted 6 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
/
Strength of character is an important aspect in a relationship. One grows wise after being burned if they can apply that wisdom when necessary. I believe we gain respect when we show strength.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Yari Garcia (Older Profile)

6 Years Ago

I would definitely have to agree. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
I love this one. It is a very wise poem. Darling.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia (Older Profile)

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

150 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 1, 2017
Last Updated on May 1, 2017
Tags: poetry

Author

Yari Garcia (Older Profile)
Yari Garcia (Older Profile)

Denver, CO



About
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ My profile has moved! Follow the link by my pic or go to www.writerscafe.org/YariGarciaYA See you there ^_^ (/ (/ (^-^) c(")(") ~*~*~.. more..

Writing