I Think I Saw You In My Sleep

I Think I Saw You In My Sleep

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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Self reflective verbiage. Inconsistent vernacular. Music.

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Infectious Texas, it isn't I you should be worried about.
The past is a fire, and who hasn't been burned by it?
I guess I wasn't quite sure how to go about you...
Just a reflection of ghostly your presence made me tense.
Infatuation and ignorance of reciprocation seemed to make sense.
I laid the wire, I paid the piper, I climbed a top that spire.  
Precious pebble your sacred geometry has flawed.
Is this what changed the way you thought of me?
Oh please, just don't think about us.
You weren't even close to enough.


© 2013 Zackery Alan Daley



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Zackery Alan Daley
random words of lyrics of mine

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Sincere reflections of past relationship, with a touch of resentment. That is what I am getting from this piece. I didn't completely understand the reference to the precious stone, but I did feel its general emotion. Pretty decent write. Thank you for sharing.

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Ronie Singson

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Its nice ;)
Read mine xx Hihi.
Just take a look on my writing please.


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The first line set the tone for the poem well, really good work. I'm not sure exactly what it means, but that is most poetry to me, I enjoyed it though, it flows well

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Ronie Singson

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http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/itsroniesingson/1294426/
i like how you put a past relationship into this poem, very good keep writing

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Ronie Singson

3 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/itsroniesingson/1294426/
Sincere reflections of past relationship, with a touch of resentment. That is what I am getting from this piece. I didn't completely understand the reference to the precious stone, but I did feel its general emotion. Pretty decent write. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ronie Singson

3 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/itsroniesingson/1294426/

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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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