Dream within Dream

Dream within Dream

A Poem by Md. Ziaul Haque

Yesterday I had a reverie,

You and I walking along the endless shore,

With the white birds being our compass, for sure,

And the heavenly air touching you gently.

 

The fragrance of yours making the sea-ripples jealous,

The colour of sky has gone red like my heart,

With the sun and moon gifting us with a stunning kart,

In which we traverse, you sitting beside ‘my Venus’.

 

I live through timelessness and then… a sudden shake,

I sense a spinning world, I awake!


© 2014 Md. Ziaul Haque



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Good poem. The rhyme seems a bit rigid at time, but the imagery certainly reflects the dream like state (especially the bits relating the cosmology). Remember that poems don't have to rhyme - in this case (especially 'for sure' some of the rhythm is lost because of it. If that was intentional, fair enough, but to me dreams have a nice rhythm. Nightmares would have a disrupted one.

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Md. Ziaul Haque

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much indeed. :)



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Good poem. The rhyme seems a bit rigid at time, but the imagery certainly reflects the dream like state (especially the bits relating the cosmology). Remember that poems don't have to rhyme - in this case (especially 'for sure' some of the rhythm is lost because of it. If that was intentional, fair enough, but to me dreams have a nice rhythm. Nightmares would have a disrupted one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Md. Ziaul Haque

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much indeed. :)

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Tags: Yeterday, Reverie, Shore, Compass, Heavenly, Air, Fragrance, Heart, Sky, Venus, Shake

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Md. Ziaul Haque
Md. Ziaul Haque

Sylhet, Bangladesh



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Md. Ziaul Haque is originally from Zakiganj, Sylhet, Bangladesh. He is a poet, epic writer, writer, academic, thinker, songwriter, short story writer, reviewer, columnist, essayist, researcher and sch.. more..

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