The Very first time

The Very first time

A Poem by Abhishek Ramkissoon

i still remember the first i saw you

my eyes got stuck on you

of all the people i've ever seen

i knew there was no one like you

i was mesmerized by the sheer radiance of your beauty

you were the light i was waiting for

i felt it for the first time

that feeling in my heart

it was something

something which told me

she's the one

you passed by not noticing me

but i couldn't take my eyes off you

it was such an intense moment

i felt my blood go so fast

my heart beat would just go as crazy

it was throbbing, i was elated

my mind said am lost

everything else was still

there was only you and me

your eyes had that spark

that spark which lit up the flame of my soul

you would not know how i possibly felt that moment

it was magical

i was day dreaming i thought

but i realised you were real

how could i forget that day

your smile, your eyes, your face...

© 2013 Abhishek Ramkissoon


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Added on May 30, 2011
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Abhishek Ramkissoon
Abhishek Ramkissoon

Vacoas, Plaine Wilhems, Mauritius



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I seek and derive most pleasure form writing,i do not really have a real category of genre,i write and its up to people to see what it really means..i write basically about myself,my own experinces bu.. more..

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