....a Praise...

....a Praise...

A Poem by Abhishek Ramkissoon
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...an attempt to praise..

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no word there is to describe you

amazing, mesmerizing, blissful, beautiful

divine as your, some say pretty some say charming 

no one can make anyone hold their breath like you do

what do i say about your eyes

myriads of colorful stars blended together to make the universe

your smile, which'll make them angels shy

a quick glance and to life would come any heart

shimmering light you are

yet so striking, how could someone not be moved by you

blessed with a soul so pure

one who won't fall for you is a fool

you are a dream, you are in every heartbeat

no mermaid no fairy no queen

yet so special and so unique

you are a myth

if music notes came to life

for your praise shall they be raised

a soft whisper or a sprinkling mist from the rain

you are like the rainbows

so high up, so nice, so pleasing

you bring smiles, you bring happiness, you are smiles , you are happiness

if flowers there are, then their fragrance you are

the blue sky you are, the soothing wind you are

my attempts might go to vain

for i wont ever find the lovely phrases 

to tell who you are

the chirping birds, the dazzling butterflies

only nature would be fit to glorify your sweetness

the glittering of your eyes would lighten even the darkest nights

you may not be the prettiest of them all

still you are beyond words, angelic, gorgeous, delicate

delightful, dreamlike, enlightening, perfect

you shine, you sparkle

anywhere, everywhere.....

© 2013 Abhishek Ramkissoon


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LOVING AND SWEET ... MAYBE YOU ARE IN LOVE ? ... NICE .. JASMINE

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good! Lucky person I guess... he or she must be a special someone... I like the poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful praise. That person is really lucky to have these words written about her.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 26, 2011
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Abhishek Ramkissoon
Abhishek Ramkissoon

Vacoas, Plaine Wilhems, Mauritius



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I seek and derive most pleasure form writing,i do not really have a real category of genre,i write and its up to people to see what it really means..i write basically about myself,my own experinces bu.. more..

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