Perception

A work in progress. Please tell me what you think.

I'm never happy with this mirror

I don't know whether it's reflection,

Or just angle.

 

Perception is difficult,

When it's you saying you care.

 

But in a month it'll lay on the floor

 

Our hands drop

And in the moment it's intense

 

I feel like I'm rolling over my bed, 

Falling awake.

 

Author's Note

I wonder about my wording. Opinions?

Reviews

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. i agree ... and you do have a way with words ... but i also know ... that beyond perception ... is belief ... and beyond belief ... is conviction ... and beyond conviction is love ... and that is all about devotion ... in my opinion of course ...