Lost

Me,

Lost in my own mind,

He,

Found me.

 

 

 

And now i will never be lost again

Reviews

[Courtney]

I really enjoyed this piece. Good use of punctuation. I like how you took ten words and have 4 lines, nicely divided. I also like the somewhat mirrored form, lines 1 and 3 with their single words and then a comma. Great work.

[Fanciful Goddess]

short and sweet nice work!

[Dimples87]

Short, sweet, and precise. Loved this piece because I relate to it.