Dreamstate

Dreamstate

A Poem by Sincerely, Alex
"

No more dreaming.

"

There is a boy beyond the clouds in the sky

With wings black as death that help him fly

Last I saw him, he flew away with my heart

Whenever he visits, its beat starts

His wings enclose me; with him I am whole

He whispers I am an angel, from higher above then he could ever attempt to hold

I will spend eternity with him, encased in his wings

 

 

When woken from this dream of longing and hope,liquid descends from my eyes

His wings do not lift me up, they make me fall to my demise

I must escape from this dream that will never come true

For my eyes are blinded by this bittersweet lie that my mind clings to

There can be no more dreaming like a girl so in love

He can never be my reality; I cannot be with him above

The angel of death is not as alive as my dreams make him to be


© 2011 Sincerely, Alex



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Alex, this poem is layered with many crossroads that can go many ways, a true sign of good writing. A love apart is the sweetest sorrow that the state of dreams we all live in will embrace and fight to not let go. Just be careful, and ready, with your wishes. Sometimes they do come true.

Fantastic write.
Antonio



Posted 7 Years Ago


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I'm feeling it, I'm feelin' it. Not really my style, but I'm still feelin' it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very intriguing write! Such mystique and such beauty! :D
I loved the imagery you created in this piece, and thought that the bold words were really effective.
You had one spelling mistake in the first line of the second stanza...'decends' should be 'descends'. :P
This was a fantastic write! For me in particular, it made me ponder the thought that perhaps we all have our own angels of death, and we all live, constantly struggling between our hoped-for-dreams, and our accepted reality.
Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well done .. your words really are visual in this... very well expressed... liked this alot... awesome job on this!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it, it spoke to it made me think about my own life how like to live in my dreams its to the point your poem even made me teary-eyed

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I like this, I found this full of emotion. I thought it was very well written as well.
I like how you have words highlighted in Black. I like this wonderful expressions here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I like it, paradoxical and good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on December 23, 2009
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Tags: angel, angel of death, dreams, longing, love, hope, sadness, pain, wings

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