And so it goes

and so it goes

along with everything we thought we knew

everything I believed 

all the things I loved

all of them

not true

the energy has lifted

it's so bright in my world now

serendipitous sayings you shared

all of them lies

all of them, 

you

how could I have fallen

how could I have been taken

there must have been something 

you saw,

some weakness in me

my glaring naïveté

in trusting everything you said

and like a vulture 

with a condescending smirk

over and over again 

you lied

until I almost believed...

Reviews

[Corset]

There are lies and then there are omissions of truth, with a fine line in-between. They aren't lies if you don't know that they are, if at the time someone says they love you and at that time they do, it doesn't make it a lie, it's just the truth in transit to where and what you are growing in and out of. I'm just here to make sure you are still ok over there Hawaii :D so glad to see you are still safe and writing, no old volcano can stop you! thinking of you, be safe! More importantly, be happy!

[Alisa Js]

The person who inspired this piece was a scammer, through and through... no one you know, though... for the record...





A lie is a lie... regardless...

Wishing you well.

Alisa

[Corset]

wishing you well right back XD

[Onlyme]

Being drawn in hook, line and word. Great read. Feel the impact of this poem. About lying love.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your comments, Dee... yes it was a lying love... and I have long since terminated any contact with that poor excuse for a human.

Wishing you well. I will be by soon.

Alisa