Bliss of Soul

the eternity of the soul on Earth

bliss of soul

about a story of a life

yet to unfold

secret wishes in my heart

bound only by my control

dashed into sunsets of her heart

excited by the edges and falling into the canyons of love

i dive into the expectations of a wanting love

all here in the bliss of soul.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Ted!

I am young again at 69 living a beauty I'll never know again.

regards,
al

[Ted Kniffen]

I know the feeling well Al. Love can draw us in like a black hole...closer and closer until finally there is no escaping the pull. We come out on the other side changed forever and hopefully for the better.

A good write

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Chris!

My gal is like a smile of the ages!

Regards,
Al

[Chris]

Seems we chase them til they turn and catch us... hell-of-a-smile...

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Lyn!

you maybe right but I'm so deep into her verbal blindness is the possible result.

regards,
al

[Lyn Anderson]

Lol. Just saw this. Bravo

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Sette!

I'm trying to swallow that mystery in order to gain insight. Nothing yet!

regards,
al

[sette]

very poignant, philosophical in nature talks about love and the mystery surrounding it

[Lyn Anderson]

Hello. Long time no see. I like this one a lot. I do have to say though, the canyons of love might have more punch if it was a stand alone -- with no other line containing love. However, you may have your reasons for repeating, in which case, I beg your pardon in advance.