it is cold

damn this cold within ...

i find myself

in place unknown

to me before

 

it is cold

it is cold

 

i know not

how to leave

this newest place

 

or would i

even want to

time will tell

 

it is cold

it is cold

 

perhaps i should

build a fire

within

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Within the place, within the heart...fire to warm the body and soul. Great wordage and repetition, stark form effective for the chill of the mood. Love the poem and send "warm" wishes your way.

[ruth]

amazing as always.
your return is spot on.