Right here

Stand still my love
nothing shall harm you
Hold on my love
to me you can

I will be right here beside you
I will be right here til the end

So stand still my love
let sunshine guide you
Hold on my love
let morning come

I will be right here beside you
Just call me and it won't be long

Stand still my love
I won't let nobody hurt you
Hold on my love
forever and a day

I will be right here beside you
I will never walk away

And if you want to leave someday
if you need some time on your own
I will be right behind you
this will always be your home

So stand still my love
nothing will harm you
Hold on my love
to me you can

For I will be right here beside you

I will be right here til the end

Reviews

[Bowers]

wow. now, THIS is a beautiful piece! great job! (is this a song?) I love it, so emotional, so peaceful, so reassuring, truly amazing!

[annabellee]

Wow, thank you so much!

[annabellee]

Wow, thank you so much!
And no, it's not a song :)

[Bowers]

lol, well its beautiful either way :D and your welcome!

[Debbie_Philly]

So very beautiful... I loved it..

. So stand still my love
nothing will harm you
Hold on my love
to me you can

For I will be right here beside you
I will be right here til the end

[annabellee]

thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

[RichGee]

This piece reads like a song....nicely written

[annabellee]

Thank you so much :)

[EloisaWrites]

Nothing will harm you...
This poem is very sacrificial, heartwarming and generous. This is the kind of love that we all want to give and we all want to receive. I like it. :)

[annabellee]

thanks a lot :)

[Lucia]

Very nice! I think people wish for true love like this all the time! I really liked it and it was very powerful and the perfect length. Reads nicely.

[annabellee]

Thank you very much :)

[ZeniaK]

This was such a sweet, meaningful poem! It wasn't mushy drabble, either, it felt really real to me. If you put this to a tune you could make a really nice song with this.

[annabellee]

Thank you so much, I would if I could play any instrument ;)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I can see this as a nice lyrical piece, anna. I like the lines especially the repetition effect. It's like an assurance that one will always be right there til the end...

So beautiful!

[annabellee]

Thank you so much and happy new year :)

[Ruth]

Lovingly voiced...a true, unconditional love...beautifully displayed x

[annabellee]

Thank you so much Poppy :)

[Troy Henson]

a wonderful piece. I must say annabellee you are improving. I like the layout, the one is even and the piece is expressive of true feelings and emotions.

Well done.

[annabellee]

Thank you so much Troy for your kind review, means a lot to me :)

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

This was awesome! So sweet and heartfelt. Beautiful job, annabellee!

[annabellee]

Thank you so much Michael :)