Charles

Charles

A Poem by Chirag Kumar

He lusts for your moans 
He relishes your screams
 Sucking your lips and biting them is a forever dream. 

But Charles isn't for a rush 
He is in for a game 
A game of seduction which would put lovers to shame. 

 And so the game begins 
 with intense rides of pain. 
His subtle moves 
his unfamiliar grooves 
surprise you 
agonize you 
terrorize you 
as he tears into your body
 with a sharp deadly dagger
 drawing a picture of wounds and 
unleashing a fury of blood on your canvas. 

An orgasmic experience 
as he strangles you with passion
 and watches you wither away 
slowly 
steadily
 fanatically
 with elation. 

Your tears are his worthy treasure 
Your struggles peak his cravings,
 and as you pass away, 
he stands up as victorious, 
bereft of any conscience 
and portraying a face of ambience 
to the world.


 He exits your home 
and enters the city to roam 
and find another chick 
to be seduced by him 
and make her fall asleep, 
Deep Deep Sleep. 

 - C Kumar 
22nd May 2015

© 2015 Chirag Kumar


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A fantastic write but as you know only one winner and that is me . lol I'm joking a lovely write and I hope you do well!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This didn't scare me but it definitely elated that dark part of my brain.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review Michy
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Woew!!! dark!! hi Chirag. A very good write!! I was drawn in and morbidly fascinated!! alf

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome description of an desperate man to fulfill his urge and not leave back any evidence and not grant life to the victim.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review didi :)
Mitali Shah

8 Years Ago

:) your welcome
Well portrayed the character sir, with wordings so good. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Gurleen :)
Its wonderful. Every details is fantastic.
You write it well friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Saddam :)
Did he kill the woman? I hope not because otherwise that may have been good love making! It's sad if he did kill her because if he liked it so much he could have kept doing it to her forever. He could be a Dominant or something with willing submissives, and would not have to be a murderer! So sad.

I liked the writing especially in some wording like orgasmic, lusts for your moans, relishes your screams, and how it agonizes and surprises the. That turned me on. Tears and struggles that peak his cravings are great too. Then in my opinion it gets less erotic when she dies if she did because I liked the whole experience up to that point.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

I have put a perspective of a psychopath who seduces girls and then kills them. So Charles isnt norm.. read more
valerie7412

8 Years Ago

You are very welcome, it was part pleasure, part ahhh no!
A very passionate write my friend! I really enjoyed it :) Definitely great creativity :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review brother :)
Charles, so well done for your topic! Excellent! But, a bit ghoulish for my normal reading material.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Raj :)
Well penned!
Definitely darkness involved here but the piece it self
has great imagery and well worded:) Thanks for sharing
and

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Jamestown :)

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Added on May 22, 2015
Last Updated on May 29, 2015
Tags: Murder, crime, seduction

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Chirag Kumar
Chirag Kumar

Mumbai, India



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