Today

We have those days...

A Poem For You

(Today)

Today started off good,

Then it got bad,

Now I'm mad,

But at first I was glad!

 

Sitting in my desk,

Can't wait for the day to pass,

Some days go slow,

This day needs to go fast,

 

Irritated and Aggrivated,

fustrated and Devistated,

Don't really care about nothing,

Everything just need to be stated,

 

Sleepy and hungry,

Is the way I feel,

To brighten up my day,

I need a full course meal!

 

Feeling a little better,

Cause I'm writing this poem,

I need to get right,

Cause I don't want to be wrong

10th grade

Reviews

[Arielle Hill]

Thank you Neva! That comment means alot.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

So neat that you still have these older poems of yours. Well done for a 10th grader no doubt.

[Arielle Hill]

(smile) Thanks Praiser! Hope you enjoy Writer's Cafe! Stick around! lol

[Praiser]

Nice I see your skill`s

[Arielle Hill]

(smile) Thanks Poetic Confusion. You can tell I definatly was not paying attention in class that day back then. Lol!

[Harmonica winds]

So very nicely written, like the rhymes, awesome write