My Dream

My Dream

A Story by Tate Morgan
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I'll tell you my dream come true. For all of us.

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   I'll tell you my dream come true.  I want to be in love again for that love to be my last.  I wish to run home to her waiting arms every night make love to her till I can't breath.  Forsaking for her all others I'd feel her sweat pour over me, like a waterfall.  To have those rains wash away my sins baptizing me in tears of joy.  Fall asleep to the beat of her heart, all the while her whispers caress my ears with "I love you". Play on the beach sharing our deepest fears and grandest joys.  Wake not knowing where I end, nor where she begins.  Drink of her love till I drown.   Look at the moon each night I'm away, know she’s doing the same.  Close my eyes, feel her heart touch my soul, and know she has shared with me something precious.  Walk hand in hand through the park at 85.  Stare into each others eyes not seeing the years gone by, but the priceless love within.  I want to die in her loving embrace from a life well spent.  All the while the lofting sounds of laughter, pour through my window, as grandchildren play hide and seek, in the fallen leaves of changing colors.  To the sound of the lonesome whistle down the river the steamers would roll.  I dream my last words to be “I love you".  The last sounds I hear to be the new life crying down the hall  echoes of the child that will take my place.  A loving tear from my beloved wife and son, I'd pass from this world with a smile.

Tate

 












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Author's Note

Tate Morgan
It was this story that found my wife for me. For all who ever dared to dream of the great love in life. I thought of this dream and carried it with me all my life. I intend to live it and take it with me to the end. My great great grandfather immigrated to the United States years ago from Ireland. And though I never had the pleasure of knowing him. Be it enough for him to know I am thankful and happy. To him I say "thank you for my life". His spirit lives within my heart!

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i can honestly say that i have never read anything quite as beautiful as this story. The love, the passion...it was all so heart warming that i found myself blushing while reading it. Your words paint a beautiful picture, Tate. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Ps- I'm extremely happy that your dream came true :) all the best to you and your loved ones

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This is beautiful and made my heart swell. You describe the love so vividly. I hope that you have this love; I think everyone wants this kind of friendship, this kind of devotion and love. Well written. It made tears well up in my eyes. I love your use of language, it adds to the beauty of the piece. It stays in my mind long after I have finished reading the piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

thank you K Tate i sent you a friend request Id be honored if youd accept
ArchaicDreamer

3 Years Ago

You're welcome! Of course I will accept, it is a honour to receive your request.
I loved it Tate ... I felt every word and you sure left me with tears in my eyes by the end.
Love is more than a feeling .. if it's shared .. appreciated and above all cherished, it is life's essence. Finding a heart that sees within yours, a hand seeking the comfort in your hand, a whisper of softness in your ear is enough to make the darkness turn into light that completes your personal growth ..... Thank you for sharing .. I sure will vote for this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

thank you Mira so nice to hear that today
a beautiful gesture tate I wonder how many people really look back from where there roots are

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

Hi man thank you It is this story that found my wife for me and is responsible for my happiness
 wordman

3 Years Ago

you are welcome glad you found it tate many are still searching
Mira ThePoetess

3 Years Ago

And many think they've found it but end up crashed upon disappointment ..... knowing they lived an i.. read more
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I agree with everyone thst reviewed this poem it is a beautiful poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

Thank you it is the only prose poem I ever wrote
thank you...i actually cried :')

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

you are welcome I cant say i am sorry to see you cried i hope they were tears of joy
Tis a beautiful dream. Different form for you. Prose. I like it. We should write more stories.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

Mark this is the only prose i have ever written.I myself dont like to write this way .I might do ano.. read more
I know this well in parts. Such a lovely story. It's reminding me in part one story piece I'm doing that's still in the writing works. When I'm done hope you come around to see it. So sweet how you speak of your great great grandfather and your wife that way. I miss the great people that have entered my life or once spoken about by family and such. And so glad it all came true for you :o)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

Thank you Rose Sometimes who we are is as simple as where we come from and who we come from send me .. read more
BlackRose

3 Years Ago

True, that we are, and will always be. Will do when it's done. All I can say is hold on, cause it wi.. read more
This story was amazing, especially with the music on the background. Made me cry.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

you are welcome this is the only prose i have ever done the rest are all rhyme and meter poetry
Camila Dias

3 Years Ago

You should do more of this type, ur really good at it!!
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

well thank you but i am much better at poetry than prose
So heart touching... Especially the walk in the park at 85 hand in had... What more could any of us dream to be true... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

thank you . What more could we ask of life than to be loved by the others in it.?
How beautiful. Isn't this what we all want, maybe - maybe not, but it sure speaks to me. We have to continue the tutelage of WC. Like, how you take this and post it on Facebook (which is where I saw it).

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

thank you wendy we shall have to take up the lesson again

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