Cry me a river

Cry me a river

A Poem by Amila Jay
"

Cry me a river my poor soul to shiver

"

c
ry me a river

my poor soul to shiver
against the burns
that ravished
in my eyes
stuck like wound
in my heart
a piece of memory
in the past
relive it a thousand times
to tear my flesh apart
this soul is ripped
this soul is sin
this soul not knows the fearful rims

© 2011 Amila Jay



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Amila Jay
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I believe sin is just lessons for us to be better. Few people can live a life without hurting or hurting others. Real sin is repeating the pain and damage again. The poem is strong. Type of poem that open the doors to conversation. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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Beautiful write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Strong bit. i love it

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Use every bad and good moments in life as lessons, life is learning. Good Piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this was very good. I love it. I like the message in this piece. =)
Imagery is great and the emotions is well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a beautiful piece. I really loved the message within this. I loved the emotions within this piece. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The battle for one's inner self is always compelling reading.
This is stunning work. I still have goosebumps.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well, I agree as a poem, it works wutie well, I netiher believe that sin exists, and our souls, are immortal, so why ahve something that can destroy it, when it's ot possible, but a good read non the less.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The rhythm and flow just lends itself perfectly to the mood of your words... that painful darkness that sweeps over us as the world grows cold in our undone state... Powerful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 22, 2011
Last Updated on December 17, 2011
Tags: life, victim, young adult, sad

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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