I look at the Mirror

I look at the Mirror

A Poem by Azure Montessa (Blue)
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I see her...

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I look at the mirror and there I see
a very young woman smiling back at me.
With dark brown eyes, mysterious and deep,
she hides her monsters with secrets to keep.

I look at the mirror and there I see
the flaws on her face in morbid scrutiny.
She believes her lie--she's nothing but a beast,
with her heart intact to stay human at least.

I look at the mirror and there I see
someone with a name but without identity.
She used to be sure, now she's lost in her way
with nowhere to go, not even a place to stay.

I look at the mirror and there I see
the greatest of failures in world history.
With sins and mistakes all piled up so high
will one fervent prayer grant her mercy to die?

I look at the mirror and there I see
a shattered soul in poignant poetry.
Adorned with applause, hailed as divine
I pity the girl in her miserable shrine.

© 2013 Azure Montessa (Blue)



Author's Note

Azure Montessa (Blue)
Photo credit: Google images.

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I pity her too. I love Google. :) ;) Great job though, I'll admit, I looked at the picture for a good minute before actually reading the poem. ;) You truly have a way with words. Keep up the good work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Alverrann.
Alverrann

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome. :)
I felt the progression in the flow of this poem.
Strong write with pull and direction.
Feeling regrets, loss, and seeking relief.
Viewing the changing image and what time creates during life.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Josie.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

4 Years Ago

You are Welcome!
It is not the prayer that grants the mercy to die but rather that which the prayer is directed toward.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Words of wisdom. Thank you, Tam.
I saw the woman aging in each stanza finding more flaws and less of herself. It is the curse of anyone who only identifies themselves through their looks. Well done and very well written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
I adore that photo, it's beautiful!

I missed reading you, this is amazing. Your description is on spot and you tell the story really, really well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

I missed reading you, too. Sorry, I was quite busy these days. Thank you again.
Amazing description in the poem. Each set of lines brought the reader in and made the reader want more. When we look at the mirror. We can see what we want to see or see the hidden demons sometimes. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote.
The mirror can be your enemy. Very well written poem. Loved it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Anna.
I see a fantastic poet! Loved every line and the repetition was very effective, a very open and emotional piece that rings true. Fantastic!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Inda.
Look in whatever mirror you want; when I see you I see an adorable little pixie :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Always the sweet one. Thank you, Elliot.
Amazing write, your closing kicked me in the chest... Bravo to you!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you.

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