Forever Gone...

You realize what you've been doing for all these years.

I cut my hair

I snuggle my bear

I cut my thighs

I get high

I break my mutual trust

I fill my mind with lust

I starve my body from food

I become unglued

I say I'm fine

I walk the line

I always lie

I curl up and cry

I take things too far

I leave an invisible scar

I break and I bash

I rip and I smash

I kneel 

I feel

I seem as if I carry on

I'm dead and gone.

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

The funny thing is we all do that. yes, we all do the same things you've written about. We are only human. We are supposed to act this way.

"I seem as if I carry on
I'm dead and gone." - Even if you change drastically and stop doing all these things, Time will still take us away..

We have to accept that we are only human. We make mistakes. We act weird.. We are not perfect.. When we accept certain things in life, we will have peace.

Good write :)

[ashleymarie]

Thank you for the review. I appreciate it! I also completely understand where you are coming from.

[TheLostMind]

You are welcome.. :) .. What do you mean by - "I also completely understand where you are coming from."?? :P

[ashleymarie]

When you say that we all make mistakes, and we act weird, that we aren't perfect. I get that. I understand. I'm just a little bit more of a screw up than most. c:

[TheLostMind]

No.. Nobody is a "screw up".. We are who we think we are.. We shouldn't let our insecurities get the better of our strengths.. :)

[ashleymarie]

Completely true, yet we all catch ourselves doing so. c:

[TheLostMind]

Can't disagree with that.. More often than not, our demons do get the better of our strengths..

[ashleymarie]

Yes, yes they do.

[SheIsMe]

So true for the majority of society. You threw it out there. Keep writing!

[Lily]

Another really raw poem, it's actually really beautiful... Don't let go of that passion, you have a fiery personality and that's amazing

[AmjadPenboyoflight]

this powerful write
very honest in your works

hope can find happiness through poetry

[ashleymarie]

Thank you, it's my favorite way to vent.

[Jamestown]

Wow! I just pray your ok now, the write itself was good, but I hope you are!
Hopefully getting it out will help! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[ashleymarie]

Thank you! It takes me by surprise when someone who doesn't know me kind of cares! Not something I'm used to!...One question though, since I'm new I'm not completely sure how all of this works...How did you find this?

[Jamestown]

It was posted on the live feed:)

[ashleymarie]

Oh. Wow.I feel really unintelligent. Thank you AP English!

[Jamestown]

Don't worry about it, you have to start somewhere. Keep writing,
it helps release some emotions. The people here are wonderful, b-blessed.

[ashleymarie]

Aww thank you! You're super sweet!

[ashleymarie]

Wasn't quite sure if this was too dark or not. The truth has to come out sometime. Why not now?