415189114

415189114

A Poem by audacious



Of all the topics I scribble down with pen, 
Your name reappears, again and again.
The spelling familiar, the sensation immense,
Your name is a blessing, but however tense
With emotions buried beneath the surface,
Your name races my heart, but my mind it curses.

-A

© 2017 audacious



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We don't seem to choose whom we Love - just whom we like.

Posted 10 Months Ago


I love this, flows well, and sweet. A new favorite.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Constantly having someone or something at the back of your mind. Well written and I like the rhyme. Nice work.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I love how the sentences are structured, they flow really well.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Heart touching. I can relate to the lines your name reappears again and again, your name is a blessing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


audacious

11 Months Ago

Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

You're welcome.
Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

I want to ask you, what's with the title? I didn't understand why those numbers?
Wow this is really amazing. Talk about truth! This is a really great poem, your word choice was amazing and the flow is perfect. What im a little confused about however is the title...

Posted 11 Months Ago


audacious

11 Months Ago

Quite a few people are it was my clever way of not writing the inspirations name without using lette.. read more
audacious

11 Months Ago

But thank you so much for the feedback, i really appreciate that!
Strong opening, not so strong closing.

It's good though. You have good focus. I usually ramble off topic. There seems to be an understanding of rhyming and brevity here. Meow.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

audacious

11 Months Ago

thanks you lots!
I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

Posted 11 Months Ago


audacious

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)

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