415189114

415189114

A Poem by audacious



Of all the topics I scribble down with pen, 
Your name reappears, again and again.
The spelling familiar, the sensation immense,
Your name is a blessing, but however tense
With emotions buried beneath the surface,
Your name races my heart, but my mind it curses.

-A

© 2017 audacious



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We don't seem to choose whom we Love - just whom we like.

Posted 1 Month Ago


I love this, flows well, and sweet. A new favorite.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Constantly having someone or something at the back of your mind. Well written and I like the rhyme. Nice work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


I love how the sentences are structured, they flow really well.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Heart touching. I can relate to the lines your name reappears again and again, your name is a blessing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


audacious

3 Months Ago

Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You're welcome.
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I want to ask you, what's with the title? I didn't understand why those numbers?
Wow this is really amazing. Talk about truth! This is a really great poem, your word choice was amazing and the flow is perfect. What im a little confused about however is the title...

Posted 3 Months Ago


audacious

3 Months Ago

Quite a few people are it was my clever way of not writing the inspirations name without using lette.. read more
audacious

3 Months Ago

But thank you so much for the feedback, i really appreciate that!
Strong opening, not so strong closing.

It's good though. You have good focus. I usually ramble off topic. There seems to be an understanding of rhyming and brevity here. Meow.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

audacious

3 Months Ago

thanks you lots!
I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

Posted 3 Months Ago


audacious

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)

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