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Of all the topics I scribble down with pen, 

Your name reappears, again and again.

The spelling familiar, the sensation immense,

Your name is a blessing, but however tense

With emotions buried beneath the surface,

Your name races my heart, but my mind it curses.

-A

Reviews

[Chris]

We don't seem to choose whom we Love - just whom we like.

[Ajla]

I love this, flows well, and sweet. A new favorite.

[Avia]

Constantly having someone or something at the back of your mind. Well written and I like the rhyme. Nice work.

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

I love how the sentences are structured, they flow really well.

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart touching. I can relate to the lines your name reappears again and again, your name is a blessing.

[audacious]

Thank you!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

I want to ask you, what's with the title? I didn't understand why those numbers?

[Kiwi.jh]

Wow this is really amazing. Talk about truth! This is a really great poem, your word choice was amazing and the flow is perfect. What im a little confused about however is the title...

[audacious]

Quite a few people are it was my clever way of not writing the inspirations name without using letters haha

[audacious]

But thank you so much for the feedback, i really appreciate that!

[Davidgeo]

Strong opening, not so strong closing.

It's good though. You have good focus. I usually ramble off topic. There seems to be an understanding of rhyming and brevity here. Meow.

[audacious]

thanks you lots!

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

[audacious]

Thank you so much :)