Inamorata intoxication..........

Inamorata intoxication..........

A Poem by barricade

That shimmering elixir of life,
poured into my glass.
A taste of the uninhibited,
awaits beyond my impasse.

Like a devious mistress,
tantalizing me in sultry ways.
Demanding intimacy with my lips,
to embalm me in moonshine haze.

All it takes is a kiss,
from this conniving paramour,
burning my insides
and the coyness that I bore.

Slowly captivating my senses,
she overpowers my whole.
Enslaved, I wear my heart on my sleeve
loosing all control.

I surrender unto this inamorata,
as I fulfill her every fantasy.
She only amplifies my desires,
unshackling the discreetest parts of me.

After our risque tryst
she puts me to slumber deep
the exploits of our night drowned in haze
just faint images she lets me keep...


© 2014 barricade



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Ah, beautiful. The flow and rhythm was wonderful in this piece, and I was hooked from the first line. I felt myself drowning in your imagery, and captivated by your words as you sunk me into an intoxicated haze of hopeless desire and fantasy.. Excellent piece, keep up the good work.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

3 Years Ago

Thank you Dewella...I'm glad my work was to your liking :)



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Truly lovely, your words pulled me in and painted such beautiful imagery. Well done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

4 Months Ago

A review after almost 3 years...had been gone for way too long...glad my words were to your liking.... read more
Beautiful! Intoxicating imagery... I was lost in your words. I love it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

4 Months Ago

Can't believe I'm reading this review after almost an year or more...I've been gone for way too long.. read more
Beautiful work, Barricade. The title captured my attention, and the beauty in your flow and rhythm captivated me throughout. Lovely work as usual.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Definitely one of the best poems I have read.
Honestly it striked right into the heart. Powerful Imagery, literary techniques used beautifully.

Keep exercising your talent.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. Nice writing. Keep writing. If possible then Do u read my writing Anguish?

Posted 3 Years Ago


Loved the pace and the rhymes. Learned a couple of new words too. Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Demanding intimacy with my lips,
to embalm me in moonshine haze.

I really love the word play and imagery. Great job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, beautiful. The flow and rhythm was wonderful in this piece, and I was hooked from the first line. I felt myself drowning in your imagery, and captivated by your words as you sunk me into an intoxicated haze of hopeless desire and fantasy.. Excellent piece, keep up the good work.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

3 Years Ago

Thank you Dewella...I'm glad my work was to your liking :)

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