Lost in you

Here in silence, I can hear your lonely screams, your abandoned cries,

In darkness I can clearly see your reflection under the moonlight.

In my dreams, you are always mine, but in my life you are just a dream,

I’m living in a world without any color, where everything is only in black and white.





Why my eternal, did we ever apart? Why did you leave a void in my heart?

Why you only exist now in our memories and some faded photographs?

Why these questions from my past still haunt me every single day and night?

Why every piece of my soul, prays so hard to just have your one more sight?





Music can’t help me now, for I have already lost my every song to you,

Symphonies of this lost love are my only music, my silence is so vast.

Roses, violets, doves and rainbows are something which I never dreamt of.

But still now, they have become a nightmare for me, a foe from the past.





When you left, you took everything…just everything away with you,

I was not able to stand, to breathe or to decide for what should I do?

You were the only reason for which I was alive, and now when you are gone,

Gone are my words, my silence, my pain, my joy; as I have lost myself in you.


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Reviews

[prodicallife]

Hi Bhavya
I don't remember, did i already reviewed this poetry earlier or not but, for now i couldn't stop from reviewing it maybe for the second time. These words are actually i can say "drifting shuttle". I almost went into trans, as i was walking towards the end of the poetry, it was like suddenly woke up from the dream and came alive. This is what i can say, everybody will love.

Regards
Prodical

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thank you,means a lot :)

[alegria]

lovely write...can relate to each word...keep writing..

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thank you :)

[Mia]

Your poetry is amazing and this is no exception!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Thank you Mia, very kind of you :)

[priyanka pant]

simply a delight to read!

[just is]

So poetic and so wonderful,
love the deepness in this

[natzky]

all hail mr bhavya..heheh..I can relate with this poem..keep up the good work..:)

[..]

like your last stanza, you have a poetic soul.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautifully written. This was really deep and emotional. Great write!

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Awesome love the deep powerful emotion in this gem.
Very poetic and the flow is wonderful.

[Akshat♥]

Awesome write...i can relate to this piece..
1st love is always beautiful..and always remembered..
its all about destiny..moving on with faith is a big challenge..
i hope u will get it soon..
keep writing:)