Night in the Garden

trying my hand at haiku

Moonlight drips softly

Over the garden shadows

Like a lost lover

 

Reviews

[Melissa]

Thank you for entering the contest. I love the visual with this Haiku. Makes you want to take a stroll in the moonlight. The contest ends June 15th, then I will be announcing the winners. Thanks again.

[Jacqueline]

Mysterious and enchanting at the same time. Good story within your haiku! :)

[PhoeniX]

elusive and hidden. good job

[~crazy Beautiful~]

well written haiku
the picture is beatiful as well

[Jet Lag]

hauntingly lovely. excellent pix.

[Frances O'Neill]

I really like this poem. I like how it really takes you there.

[Candle in the wind]

This is so tangible I can almost see the drifting moonlight!Comparing it to a lost lover is so poignant. There is something so soothing yet so melancholy about moonlight.

[W.k.kortas]

Tight little metaphor, almost textbook. Crisp and solidly done.

[Olivera]

Your Haiku is beautiful. First two verses are awesome, among the best I have ever read. The third one implies sad and distante personalized thought.

[Kathleen Marie]

This is lovely, very well stated! Blessings!