Your eyes..part 2

Your eyes..part 2

A Story by bluessadmood

i always loved her eyes,ha ha

everything is so poetic about her ..
her eyes ,her words ,the way she forms them and let them out
till they reach your ears..true music you ever hear
her walk ,i pity earth how it could stand those lovely steps
i always fear it may shake and break,how it could stand all such beauty
her eyes ,ohh all so deep like so many worlds are lived in there
tells you how much she could have seen and witnessed,i think
though she never truly went that suppose she travels in time and space
surly she is not like us..such beauty could never be earthly..its shameless
did she come from other planet..then earth changed all will never be enough
i am blinded by so much light coming from her..a fantasy creature
how come could we not see..her smile pale ,a touch of sadness and deep in thought
how she would blend with nature like she is part of it..who is she

© 2011 bluessadmood

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Posted 7 Years Ago

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thnak you so much ,glad you liked it,its just addressed to am imaginary figure ha ha

Posted 7 Years Ago

Oh, but this is beautiful, Moayad :) This is Poetic. I am sure that if you showed it to her, she could not be but moved :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on March 21, 2011
Last Updated on March 21, 2011




The Music I like,the Carpenter,all their songs and albums,The Super Tramps,one of their songs ,reminds me of a girl who nearly broke my heart,still feel the pain ,no ,no i will not tell who ,I like.. more..

Writing.. Writing..

A Story by bluessadmood