Never Believed In Supermen

Never Believed In Supermen

A Story by bluessadmood
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just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

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The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..
 
Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..
 
Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..
                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 

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Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

1 Year Ago

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..s.. read more
  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here th.. read more



Reviews

Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

1 Year Ago

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..s.. read more
  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here th.. read more
It needs minimal editing, but it's really good. I really like your style of writing. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

1 Year Ago

thank you so much..so glad you liked it
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.
epic...simply beautiful. love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

7 Years Ago

thank you so much ,
A nice short story.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

9 Years Ago

thank you for that..she could do even more,,ha ha
Your emotions just pour out in this piece. It's as if i am inside your head while you are thinking all of these thoughts! Very descriptive! Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:D good descriptive word choice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written , it would be great to meet a superman one that could fly and zoom right off this planet into orbit, and explore the Universe, great poem. sent my mind into space and other worlds. Moonbeam.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

strong write, I love the softer ending.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sweet! And yet one cannot help asking what happened? There seems also to be a nostalgic note in those wonderful words, as if all those sweet moments you fear will never come again.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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to be somebody's superhero...wow!! what a great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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