Words..The Only way

Words..The Only way

A Story by bluessadmood

today ,i woke up again,just like any other day
i woke up to another nightmare like so many i have yet to live
the first thought came to mind was you,but where are you
could you still be there somewhere,how i always try
and look elsewhere for you,i could never find
thought i would send you some words ,thoughts
that would totally stun your mind,want to please you
then maybe you would look my way,and see me like the other days
though i know you would never be pleased,like i always knew
i put the words before me and tried to choose ..the most provoking
those most strange,colored and deep different from what any used to say
i tried again and again ,and i failed you and me again ,i knew from the start
like any coward i could never do ,and here i stand short from reaching out to you


© 2012 bluessadmood



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I very much enjoyed the last line,

"and here i stand short from reaching out to you"

Your tone and emotion is felt, nicley done.




Posted 5 Years Ago


I'm fascinated by your unique style. I like the way you pack feelings and emotions into what you write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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