Life

Life is like the sea,

it rolls over unsteady ground.

Life is like the sky at night,

shimmering through the dark.

Life is like a flower,

it blooms into the most beautiful things.

Life is a mystery,

you never know what will happen next.

Life is unknown, we will never know its secrets.

Reviews

[chloe cruz]

Very well done! Great job! *smiles*

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Simple, but written very well. LIfe is like...and then you expound on that. Nice job. Def original.

kena

[Dalaina Renee]

Very well written! I enjoyed reading this!

[Robert Luna]

Life is so much that is never seen or understood. Life is exactly what we make it out to be. I enjoyed your deeply personal look at a few of the things that life means to you. You heart seems to have a purity that seeks for something more than what it has known.


Great Job!!!!!!!!!

[Wicahpi]

Isn't that the truth! Very nicely done and so true!

[Don Coorough]

These are all such nicely thought out similes. You obviously spent some time thinking this out. I commend you for your insight and your ability to express what lies within you!

[ShadowWolf]

Life is full of secrets until we open our eyes and take the time to see and try to understand them. Well done!

[Mysty Rayn]

This is kind of inspiring. I'll have to remember to read it when I'm having a bad day. :) Thank you.

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

I dont think life has any secrets.
because i dont think it keeps anything from us.
I think we keep ourselves from it.

[Maria C. Donado]

Beautiful. Instant fav.