A Poem by breakthebrokenone

The photo included is of the train tracks in my town and this poem is about my depression and anxiety

Those feelings
of feeling so
that there is no end insight

the Deep, dark whirlpool
that swallows you up
but doesn't spit you out.

And the one person you want to be there
and they don't come to you when you reach out.
So you suppress
and hold on to what little hope that you have left
and let the tears fall from your eyes
until there is nothing left...

So come down to the train tracks
Where a new journey awaits
To new destinations
Along steel railways

And you hope that you'd get hit
Because they won't miss you anyway

© 2017 breakthebrokenone

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I love your visual imagery and the concept. Very well written. My favorite lines "And you hope that you'd get hit Because they won't miss you anyway" really ended this piece well and a place I am at now. So I agree fully on how you feel with these words...


Posted 11 Months Ago


11 Months Ago

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate your feedback. Feel free to comment on other pieces, I appre.. read more

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Added on November 10, 2017
Last Updated on November 10, 2017
Tags: Depression, anxiety, traintracks



christchurch, canterbury, New Zealand

I am 21. I would love to hear what my fellow poets think of my work. I post new work every second day. I have tattoos and love Leonard Cohen and Sylvia Plath. I listen to a lot of Lana Del Rey and I w.. more..