I Shall Wait

I Shall Wait

A Poem by Brian M. Peeples

As time grows thin,

I shall wait

As life nears its end,

I shall wait

As you grow to love him,

I shall wait

As my love for you will never bend,

I shall wait


As my passion may never die,

I shall wait

As my soul may whistle an alluring tune,

I shall wait

As my spirit may soar ever so high,

I shall wait

As my heart may love only you,

I shall wait


I shall wait for you, for you to see

The love that I express, a love so deep


No matter how long it may take

Whether I live, or die, or one day share my truth

I shall wait...

I shall always wait...

Always for you...

© 2014 Brian M. Peeples


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Fantastic write!
patients is a virtue:)
Love the patients shown in the piece:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Once again Michael
You did it !!!
Your poems and stories are always captivating!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


As others have said, the repetition of a soft, sweet line is greatly effective. I also like the alternating lines and their growing and development from the start. Lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Powerful and romantic to a degree. Great work. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is romantic...hopeful, sweet and gentle :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


A sad, yet hopeful romantic poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I honestly love this poem!
I love how you use the line 'I shall wait'
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aww I really like this! It's super pretty, especially that last line.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great job..I love the repetition, it really works good in this poem. It's such a passionate writing...keep writing!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very romantic! Nice job Brian!
The repetition really enforces the dedication to your love.


Posted 9 Years Ago



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Brian M. Peeples
Brian M. Peeples

Norwich, CT



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I am a twenty-three year old writer & poet. My passion for writing comes from all over. I love to write, and I love to inspire others. Hopefully when I'm gone one day, I'll leave behind all my writin.. more..

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