Never Let This End

woah. another non depressing poem. IM ON A ROLL, YO!

You wrap your arms around me,

holding me tight,

never letting go.

I can feel you breathing next to me,

sharing the same air.

Our legs entwined,

eyes gently shut,

my head on your shoulder,

feeling so at peace.

Your lips brush over mine,

and my heart clenches tightly,

skips a beat.

I smell you all over me.

It's overwhelming, but I love it.

I've lost track of my hands now.

I don't know where they are.

I don't care.

My brain is on overdrive,

My mind is numb.

Nothing but this moment matters.

Everything is right now.

There's nothing between us,

but the love we share.

This is my paradise.

Please, never let this end.

 

 

Author's Note

opinionsss please (:

Reviews

[Lauren Burch]

i don't think it was really depressing as it was warming. Being with a love is definitely an amazing feeling, and you managed to express that in words. Wonderful. :)

-Lauren Burch

[Solis-Lopez]

that was so cool! that was really good, i like ur word choice and the metaphors u use. i'll look at more of ur work, u've got a fan ^-^

[Becca :)]

nice.....but our legs entwined??? whoaaaa!!! hahahahahaha lol!!! nice work!!