GREAT SOUND

It is about the sound of thunder

Thunder has a great sound to it.

You know when rain is coming when you hear thunder.

It is a sound that shuts down the public pool.

It is a sound that you can hear a mile or so away.

It might come across as a negative, but it is a positive sound.

It makes all of the negative sounds of the day go away and brings   something peaceful.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think of it :) thanks

Reviews

[DeirdreInShadows]

I've always enjoyed rain and the sound of thunder and i was happy to read this poem finding that others enjoy it too. It was short and simple and very lovely.

Though, i cant quite put my finger on it, but there seems to be something... lacking. when i read the poem, i felt like it was not completed. Perhaps it's how i read it or the layout you've chosen, i honestly cannot tell you.

Still a very good piece though. well done!

[SyberRose]

thunder is an amazing sound...I like thunderstorms on a hot summers day. Enjoyed...Rose

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :) :) me too

[Lea Walker]

You took something so simple like thunder and made it something more than just a sound we hear before rain. Good job.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :) I tried to do that

[Norah]

This is exactly the way I feel about thunder! You describe it so vividly ...excellent write !!

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :) it is awesome how u feel the same way about thunder :)

[MandaBear]

Great poem. I like the thunder over the lighting any day

[Justin]

thanks :) :) it just takes one sound and u know it is about to rain :)

[MandaBear]

Yeah dont mind rain or thunder but no lighting lol

[Justin]

i enjoy the rain, it is peaceful :)