Night Sky of Fall

Just a poem about the fall night sky

The beauty of the night sky

especially this time of year

fall is most amazing time of year

it produces night skys like this

just walk right outside my apartment

I see this image

makes all the negative of the day go away

it tells me that there is beauty in life

regardless of how the day went

grateful to see images like this

night sky like this can turn a negative day into a positive day

the colors of the night sky especially this time of year

are amazing

when you live in a small town

you are able to see images like this

that people in the city

would pay to have pictures of

it is something that us as humans

sometimes take for granted

that is why fall is amazing

Reviews

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Very inspirational and for a great time like we are in now. May the fall season hear your magical words of love you made for her. :)

[Justin]

thanks nancy :) i just happened to look outside my apartment window, knew i had to take a picture of it :)

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

awww iss that a real pic you put cause if you did its lovely :)

[Justin]

thanks :) it is all about timing

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

you welcome i do the same and take pics of mostly everything cause you never know when u get a great shot or video lol

[Justin]

yup, i have more that i will post so u can see them :)

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Cool will surely see

[Justin]

thanks, it is always nice to show off your work rather it is pictures or writing

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

yes it is a great feeling

[Justin]

we are doing art :)

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

art is anything you mentally paint

[Justin]

I agree with u a trillion percent :)

[Hannah]

Such beautiful imagery; so full of pathos. I come from a small town, and it really is beautiful to see the seemingly endless forests with their leaves changing color. It seems like the whole world is shifting.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) it was perfect timing for the picture, I agree with everything that u have said :)

[heavenscentgirl1]

Justin, you have painted a beautiful picture with the words you’ve shared here ~ almost as beautiful as the actual picture you’ve posted to enhance this piece. I also like the presentation of the different colored lines.

Take care and enjoy a beautiful day my friend.

Blessings,
~ hsg

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :) I actually took that picture right outside of my apartment, it was perfect timing!!!

[heavenscentgirl1]

Yes, timing is everything! That is a very nice picture, thanks for sharing it with us.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) it enjoy taking pictures

[Meaghan Rhymer]

Nice use of imagery here, I would expand on it. Don't be hesitant to get deeper into the descriptions of the trees, the branches, the leaves...give us more to run wild with. I would also dabble with using punctuation to separate some of the lines into stanzas. It will give the reader a chance to pause and reflect!

[Justin]

thanks :) :) I could expand it a lil bit :)