A siren in sea foam

Dulcet whispers across the sky

Tints of blue-kissed seas

These are fleeting memories

Reflections of her in my mind

Like an elixir of endless summer

Daydreams drifting overhead

A stormless presence she was

Fierce and free, like a phantasm

My labyrinth with a siren in sea foam

As she rose from the muted stone

Melted away the barren wasteland

Making spring rise in my deserts…

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Astounding.. what a vivid portrayal.. felt like I almost met the angel you are describing..
Beautifully penned..!

[An owl on the moon]

It amazes me how one person can transform us, so I am glad you could sense that wonder. Thank you so much, Jyoti! :)

[marcus]

A beautiful description! Thank you!

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, marcus!

[Renée]

dreamy, lovely, thoughts.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Renée.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Her existence is a cold glass of water in the desert of existence.

[An owl on the moon]

Yes... you understand... she is every drop of water in my barren world.

[Ruth]

Oh my goodness....sensual, luring, intoxicating! Wow, stole my breath! lol Just divine love...every line a smooth invasion of sublime :)

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, thank you so much, Poppy! Somehow there is magic in every drop of her... every wave of her... :)

[...]

amazingly salty, sweet, and intoxicating. Like sipping a Margarita on the sands of love :))))

[An owl on the moon]

I'm glad you were able to taste this too... thank you for your sweet visit, dear poet. :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

I just wonder how you do this mate. You consistently create a picture of beauty of all the seasons in the years I have been honoured to read your work. In this poem I pictured myself on the beach feeling the summer breeze and the poem went by. Love it mate :)

[An owl on the moon]

My dear friend, how you encourage my heart so well. Thank you! May you always find yourself in the joy of beautiful places for your soul.

[~]

This.. this longing in your work, is magnetic. The way you will your words to appear as if from a hidden world, only your pen has access to, is always thrilling to read.
I love the metaphors of attraction, and search.. always searching.
The brevity of her appearance melts away with the foam.
A beautiful write :D

[An owl on the moon]

I do believe you've found the key I have hidden in the plastic rock outside my soul's door... you never cease to glimpse beyond the mere letters and lines, dear poet. Thank you so much... Yes, for now she is in that place of mist and memory... but the current is strong in the hidden worlds... :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, summer love....nothing quite like it. The imagery in this poem is stunning, Craig. So very romantic. Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you! Yes, dear Lydia... there is something about summer love... and a lover who makes it summer all year long. :)

[Adam Adams]

"Dulcet whispers across the sky... " What a beautiful singled quoted line it is! Liked the starting of the piece, you've created very joyous vibes of ecstasy around your words. It's, of course, one of my fav. writes ever! I also find the wisp of remarkable love in your philosophical tints which's seemed very soothing to read along time. Every line's nicely pen'd & contains much depth of your thoughts/visions within its imagery. Wonderful!

[An owl on the moon]

How much I appreciate your comments, my friend! Thank you so much. Hope you're having an amazing week. :)