I walk the sand alone

Poetic passage from my novel, An Owl on the Moon.

Reviews

[poetgurl]

I could see this as a scene from a movie in the beginning, with birds cawing
from above, This is wonderful. You write wonderful.

[In Em's Wonderland]

"Footprints become our secrets in the sand." The sole action of taking a stroll along the shore is such a mindful thing...it brings you back to where you need to be, brings your mind clarity as well as peace. I'm not much for actually being 'in' the ocean, but I enjoy it's simplify and knowing that there is so much more to discover underneath...just like us human beings.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your moments here... your thoughts on my writing... always. And yes, so true. I guess we are all our own oceans... the surface spaces all see... and the deep life hidden within. 🤗

[emmajoygreen]

The All Around is prey to cynicism, a need to ignore its considered floral undertones. But to others there is life at large when a person trudges steep hills, climbs even steeper mountains or, dives into an ice-cold lake or river and feels terror hit the skin then - come to a gulp of life hitting home returning. Seems you do.. which can mean, may mean, you write from deep memories and even deeper pain. That said, your words can be shared with many and consequently, understood as a determined stand to live again.. and again.. if only for the days spent smiling.. a tribute to self. Perhaps? .

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, yes... perhaps... there are many shadows in my world... in memory... and moving moments... but there is also a place of hope. Wishing it for you as well... in all you are... all you face in this world. And true... cynicism... that song seems like it's always on repeat.

[June bug]

Ah I sense maybe a rebirth of being a new. Maybe with nature or maybe with God.
One can be born again with either. This is worth a ponder. Anyways I love nature.
Makes one breathe again.

[An owl on the moon]

Yes... grateful you could feel that here. So often we get caught in the world... pulled under... and don't realize that we can be born anew.

[Kim S.]

I love nature and all of the birds singing makes the heart grow fonder, to know God has his hand on all of us. This is quite a wonderful write. Lovely background.

[An owl on the moon]

Thanks so much, Kim! I love God's world too... my backyard is a bit of a sanctuary for the birds... and they keep their songs so alive there.

[Poetic Beauty]

I often find that nature make me aware of God and all His might with the creation of such beauty surrounding me.

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, yes... I find this too... God's wonder rising all around us through His created world. THANK YOU for stopping here.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are quite welcome. Nature is magical and magnificent. God the master painter and creator

[Lorry]

Very apt, as colours join us once more in the season of rebirth and renewal.
Very well painted.

[An owl on the moon]

So grateful for your reflections here, Lorry. May your spring be all joy!